Does television remove loneliness or not?
We are living in science era, where everyday we can see millions of new inventions. One of beautiful invention of science is television. In my opinion, yes, television remove loneliness. In this essay, we will discuss about television.
First of all, if we talk about ancient time when most of population based on farming occupation, each individual was having lots of work in their day to day life. However, with the passage of time, our need of living, requirement and life style has changed significantly. Due to higher expectation from life, everyone is busy and having very less amount of time. In free time, person can watch T.V. which not only entertain them but also update them with current affairs.
On the other hand, while working on a task, person can also enjoy with television. Due to television, now people wants to spend their most of time on virtual serials, movies where somehow they feel connected themselves. Television also provide them plenty of options related to music, science, fiction where user can switch their interest from one to another.
To sum up, we can say television remove loneliness somehow to individual but still each individual should arrange some time so that they can explore new things in life and connect themselves with others.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, while, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02816901408 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61436173048 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652582159624 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0253553309 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103028073832 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413854583567 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823064568771 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755676751275 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654947442871 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.