Does television removes our loneliness or not?

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Does television removes our loneliness or not?

Surely there has been no time where the live of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals the television has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analysis and explain. I fully agree with notion and discuss this writing in my further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are myriad gadgets of entertainment that are provided by technology. One of them is television which makes our life easily. The first and foremost, these days, majority of parents have hectic schedule because of competition so it is easy for their children to utilize their time by watching television. Moreover, some individuals have to stay away from their home due to work so they can spend their time on TV.
Moving further, homemaker can enjoy their household chores by enjoying to the music. They will not feel hesitation regarding their work. Last but not the least, television also helps to the aged masses because they can listen religious music and watch news as well.
To put it into the nutshell, it is crystal manifest from above that television makes our life very delight. Also, it is better source of gaining knowledge about different things of life.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00483091787 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61245926397 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676328502415 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0271384904 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956884176757 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359674953162 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617028562592 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589549838738 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286522764797 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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