Education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Education’s role in individuals’ professional life has become significantly more leading in the past few decades. Albeit, there has always been a heated debate about whether education is the best approach to attain an enviable job position or not. While some people are of the view that by attaining a higher education, individuals are more likely to find a suitable job, there are others who believe that gaining excellent interpersonal skills as well as experience is of a higher importance. This essay tries to discuss both arguments before arriving at a convincing conclusion.
On the one hand, a sizeable number of people hold this idea that being practised and social are decisive factors for a greater part of companies when they decide to hire their staff. They often argue that most employers are looking to recruit more experienced employees with a higher level of social skills. Moreover, in a wide range of possessions, having ability to interact with others, especially customers, is a vital necessity since companies’ rate of sale are extremely depended on their personal’ interpersonal skills.
Although it is undeniable that both practical expertise along with outstanding characteristic is of vital factors to find a desirable job, it is also of similar magnitude to discuss a subsequent factor which is the level of job applicants’ knowledgeability. Personally, I am an outspoken advocate of the idea that considers education as an important prerequisite to grasping an appealing position. It is universally accepted that manual job positions have lost their chief role due to the fact that a majority of companies are trying to substitute manual workforce for automated machines; thus, the role of experimental skills has become diminished in the past few years. Furthermore, having a degree from a prestigious university may open doors to better career prospects for job seekers. Being graduated from a reputable university convey this message to the employers that you are knowledgeable, and can add value to your company in a long run.
In conclusion, however, no one can understate the importance of social strengths and experience and their positive impact on people’s career, I tend to reaffirm my viewpoint which gives an emphasis to the belief that indicates education as a determining element to have a better career prospect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1207.87684729 168% => OK
No of words: 376.0 242.827586207 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39361702128 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 3.92707691288 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2915820243 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 139.433497537 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 379.143842365 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9234689422 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 104.977214359 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163248937988 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530183092125 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393210490101 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947824421032 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546657138019 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 55.0591133005 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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