Talk about pros/cons of this era as it is full of daily inventions
There is just enough, advancement in the field of technology in the current world.Every now and then the there is progress in the field of information technology.All this is done for the comfort of the mankind and to make their life easier. This essay will discuss both the pros and cons of the modern era which is full of daily inventions.
When we think about the technology, the first thing that comes to our mind is the computer. As the computers posses such a high processing power and the capability of doing multi-tasking, they have been adopted to enormous applications.The field of agriculture where once dozens and dozens of farmers were required has now been replaced by the single computer. In the field of medicines, a lot of research and discoveries have been done which has enabled to excel by leaps for the betterment of mankind.
Despite the various advantages, looking on the negative side we find that the humans become completely disabled when the machine breaks down or the computer crashes, this dependency is just too much.One has to be in the constant learning mode and keep himself updated in order to retain his job. Due to the fact that machines are able to perform the task of many persons in one go, companies are looking to outsource or to cut the staff count.
To warp up and in the view of the above-presented points, in the modern era where daily inventions bring the magnitude of benefits, it does bring demerits as well with itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76953125 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76650486975 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0875119213 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.625 104.977214359 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183034290825 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787411198681 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123752216181 0.071462118173 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101247581274 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891979679836 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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