The information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had
some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
The world has converted into a globalized village. Thanks to the advancement made in the field of information and technology almost in the all the sectors. The mass communication has become stronger than ever before. It is very convenient to send an instant message to anyone across the globe or receive a spontaneous response to the e-mail. The mass communication has brought both the pros and cons of it. This essay will throw light on both the aspects.
Mass communication has helped to bridge the world cultural gap. Different countries thousands of miles apart can interact with each other, exchange messages and become aware of each other's culture. The foreigners can interact with their families back at the home, thanks to the technology of audio and video conferencing. There are so many media channels available that one can keep himself updated with the latest developments at the social and political level.
On the negative side, there are security issues. Putting the information on the internet means exposing it to the world, there is a threat of the website or mailing address to be hacked. One has to be in the constant learning mode in order to keep the job security. The dominating cultures are laying down their monopoly in the market through their influence and the weaker languages are being diminished.
To wrap up, with mass communication becoming stronger day by day, it brings with it both the positive and the negative points. One has to be watchful that to what extent he is bringing it into his use and how to maneuver as to get maximum out of it.
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- Should the employees be considered when making the decisions for the company? 77
- Does law induce a change in the people's behavior? 85
- "Marketing strategy for big companies should be placed on offer and discounts,and in what ways this can impact on their reputation 77
- global warming 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87777777778 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69945124739 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.717588017 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3125 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 7.25397266985 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969479545647 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03429401393 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436664172407 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579330185125 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266344530342 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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