Environmental pollution, be it air pollution, water or noise pollution, has raised at an alarming rate over the past decade. It is argued by some that it can be managed by individuals, while other are of the opinion that it can be handled efficiently only by the government. I agree that government can bring a positive change in reducing the pollution over individual efforts.
Government can have a wider impact in curbing the problem, since the rules and regulations enforced by the government will be applicable to people all over the country and they have to abide by them. Government can impose hefty fines on defaulters and in effect, people will start following the rules which will have a direct impact in reduced air pollution. For example, data revealed that the number of pollution certificates issued were the maximum in 3 weeks than last 5 years after the amended Motor Vehicle Act with hefty fines was imposed.
Individuals can also contribute to reduce the pollution at their own level, but it would not be able to tackle this global problem. There is very less that they can do alone. Every individual does not want to take the responsibility of doing things until or unless it is imposed on them. For example, people can only contribute in certain ways like stop throwing dirty water in rivers, listen to music at low volume or start to carpool instead of taking their vehicle out everytime.
Though people can play an important role in decreasing the environmental pollution to some extent by bringing a change in their habits, it is only the government who can play a major and crucial role. I agree that government has to act swiftly and efficiently to make sure we all are aware of the consequences of pollution and make sure we change our ways to protect our nature.
- Do you think consumers should avoid over-packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers? 77
- Do you think consumers should avoid over-packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers? 77
- Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals Real change can be made at the government level What extent do you agree or disagree 58
- In towns and cities, the large shopping malls should replace the small local shops. Do you agree or disagree? 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t they can do, and also each individual doesnt want to take the responsibility of doin...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... it is only the government who can play an major and crucial role. I agree that go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81967213115 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70656879584 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.1182243503 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 133.636363636 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300074439821 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112325158321 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600546298013 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177283177907 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717936405421 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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