In towns and cities, the large shopping malls should replace the small local shops. Do you agree or disagree?
Shopping malls have changed the way people shop these days. People prefer to have a one-stop-shop for their every need. Hence it is often thought to replace the small local shops with bigger malls. This essay will discuss the benefits of malls and shops and offer a stand-in favor of or against this viewpoint.
Shopping malls give a rich experience of shopping where one can shop for all things like clothes, shoes, electronic items, etc. under one roof. Malls also have kids playing areas and a food court where people can enjoy meals after shopping for long hours.
First of all, local shops offer direct or indirect employment to many people. If local shops are closed, the unemployment rate would increase steeply. Secondly, the things that we get in the local shops are way cheaper than the same things available in malls since malls have to pay higher rents and consumers have to bear some part of it in form of expensive items. Middle-class families and poor people cannot afford to pay extra price for the same items.
Shopping malls can offer a relaxing experience by providing all the things in one place, but no one can deny the importance of the local shops to keep the rates reasonable and affordable for middle-class and poor people. Hence, I conclude that bigger malls should not replace the local sho.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85087719298 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31711817279 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570175438596 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.9130968382 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0769230769 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233554852479 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100735261506 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666161272866 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16202309847 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366275238474 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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