The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
The importance of looking after the planet and the ecosystem, which was always debatable, has now become controversial. The substantial influence of human interference has sparked the controversy over the potential impact on the climate change in recent years. This essay will elaborate what are the main reasons why the environment is suffering the consequences of such acts and also name the responsible for solving it, and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why the Earth is in danger, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that air pollution as well as the emission of toxic gases to the atmosphere, largely contribute to the global warming. In consequence, ice mountains are melting, animals are dying and the whole planet is threated.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that the authorities and government, who are the most influent people in the world, should take the responsibility and work harder in order to prevent the extension of the current problems, therefore avoid a major catastrophe. For example, organizations such as Greenpeace, UN and so many other companies should organize campaigns in order to spread out the conscious regarding the environmental issues to encourage people to preserve the place where we live and make it possible for the next generations.
From what has been discussed, it can be concluded that everyone is responsible for keeping a healthy planet, even though the authorities play a vital role in this context, therefore this problem should be well handled by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20622568093 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00094611798 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8439180105 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.25 104.977214359 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.125 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.25397266985 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157257659632 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508451034522 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459320369468 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791364325778 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414960091416 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 12.6369458128 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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