In a recent time, there are so many problems are exist regarding the environment such as climate change, greenhouse effect and different types of pollutions. These all problems occur due to harmful acts of the human being and their unwanted needs. I personally feel that it can be solved by the combined effort of the governments and individuals. In subsequent paragraphs, I will discuss my point of view on this topic.
To begin with the individuals, People are nowadays doing innumerable acts to fill their personal desires without thinking of the environment. So that, it is the individual’s duties to think about our environment. Individuals or organisation can take so many steps to save the earth: plastic bag should not be used; use cooler instead of AC in a home, and proper disposal of garbage. I personally think that every individual must take it as a moral duty.
Governments are also responsible for controlling these problems: by putting the specific limits on pollution created by industries; they can aware people by different mediums; they can ban the things which are dangerous for the environment and government can make new legislation so that can create fear among the people before doing illegal acts.
In the nutshell, to foregoing discussion propounds the view that solving these immense issues, not at all an individual task. It should be the combined effort by governments and individuals. In my point of view, everyone, including governments and individuals, must have to consider it a foremost duty
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.172 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04475680474 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5994396017 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227899803599 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762106259816 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418833098675 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12149100208 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447470492648 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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