Education refers to the activity of learning or instructing to uplift the life and to do or achieve something. It plays a vital in a basic life as well in development of a nation. “the more educated people in a country are, the more successful their nation become”. I’m completely agree with statement because opportunity may opine that the skills are necessary for development and can be possible only if you are educated.
Education play a crucial role in fundamental development of a society, if a society is developing than a nation too. Educated people are broadminded, they have capacity to recognized the need of a nation. Educated people can not only improve the lifestyle, but can also increase the GDP of a nation. In addition, education also create opportunity of employment to their country due to which the rate of unemployment can be down. Country like USA, Australia, England, Germany, etc. are now developed country and they have upgraded technology because of Education.
However, I also believe that uneducated people also play a vital role in the progressive of nation because to do labor types of work, an educated people don’t want to do. So for illiterate people government should run free skills training to improve their efficiency and to access with the latest technology. There ae many people who have skill but don’t have finance to do something, so for those people government should come ahead for them, because they can also help to rose GDP rate which is necessary for a nation.
Therefore, I would say that education and prosperity of a country are closely correlated to each other. There are numerous examples where well-developed educational system is playing a vital role in the progress of a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uplifting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'instruct' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: uplifting
...the activity of learning or instructing to uplift the life and to do or achieve something...
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Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...le only if you are educated. Education play a crucial role in fundamental developme...
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Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Education) must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...le only if you are educated. Education play a crucial role in fundamental developme...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: improving
...ernment should run free skills training to improve their efficiency and to access with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07216494845 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95465108562 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518900343643 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5779856281 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313619809805 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115506567191 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109995368093 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201488277991 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965497381285 0.0609392437508 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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