Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree? Argumentative / persuasive/ opinionated type essay.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of academics arguing that Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. however, I do not entirely agree with this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that being a part of extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving can not only contribute to take risk but it also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to wide range of advantages it offers, not only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance improve the productivity and quality of their life, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these benefits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Beside, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it apparent why many are in favour of extreme sports.
In view of the arguments, one can conclude that, benefits of extreme sports are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04048582996 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76268255317 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6580114207 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0451219455977 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0179869795968 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325801987982 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0269322321438 0.151781067708 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395345820335 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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