Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Everyone has the right to choose their own hobbies, but there are hobbies more dangerous than others. This raises a question of whether or not the practice of extreme sports should be prohibited. People who play those dangerous sports are undoubtedly in favour of them, while others deem them too life-threatening to be practiced freely without any regulations. Both of those views should be carefully dissected.
On the one hand, extreme sport advocates argue that those sports help them relieve stress in their everyday life and amplify their sense of accomplishment and confidence. Take bungee jumping for example. People who have made jumps all convey that it is very refreshing and extinguishes their worries completely. Extreme sports also allow them to exhibit their individualism as not many people dare play these sports so it is a sign of great courage. Playing extreme sports is just as much a hobby as reading books or listening to music, and therefore, no one has the right to inhibit them from enjoying it.
On the other hand, opponents rebut that extreme sports are too risky and can cost people lives. There have been reports of people seriously injured when skiing or skydiving. Hence, there should be laws passed to limit the number of people who choose to practice them. Laws that forbid them are the same as laws that forbid the use of guns or fireworks, which are there to ensure people’s safety.
In conclusion, while it may be difficult to legislate laws to ban the practice of extreme sports, it does not mean that people should continue doing it without great cautions. It is in everyone’s best interest to be mindful of the threats these sports pose, no matter how wonderful it makes people feel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... than others. This raises a question of whether or not the practice of extreme sports should b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95205479452 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64208722088 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6711997534 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191581603628 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743865579963 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06464882677 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129276161864 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333454510423 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.