A few folks trust that the family has the most vital effect on the youths while others believe that friends have the greatest impact. Discuss and give opinion.
it is irrefutable to say that there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend of youth upbringing in the today' world. Some people opine that family play a vital role in moulding and shaping teenagers whearas other group analsis that friends paly a crucial role on the youths, I, personally believe that both goes hand on hand. this essay will give an assertion on the both sides of contention ensuing crumbs before deducing a plausible conclusion.
To embark with, there are deluge of benefits that can be contributed to the category of family importance. first and foremost, family is the first school for a childen as a whole, they can guide novice, by making a difference between right or wrong as a mentor. For example,teenage is the tender age in which youngers can be misledged, however, family can help to overcome by this problem. secondly, family is a group of people who live together by serving various elements which are mandatory for the basic foundation; moral values, ethic culture, respect, for others and so on.
On the flip side, there is a group of anaylsts who believe that friends play an vital role in youth's life. Firstly, there is a proverb that good friends are the best gift, however, it depends person to person. Nowadays, the importance of peers become higher in the youths life, they feel more close to their friends rather than family members. Modernasim is the major cause for it that has changed the view of culture and society and peer pressure as well. secondly, friends are the best companion as a guider, mentor, helper, to correct a blooming bud.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that both play an equal role with
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82006920415 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56834594733 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1425830354 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165705947447 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537688180368 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415260100111 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906729485888 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426226863717 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.