Food travels thousands of miles farm to consumers. Some people believe we
should buy food from local farmers to protect the environment and support
local business and do the advantage of this out by the dis-advantage.
Nowadays, supermarkets are stocked with higher percentage of imported foods rather than local
food products. As per the survey, many people around the world are likely to consume imported
foods rather than local ones. This cause a detrimental effect on social economy and great impact on
environment. We will discuss about this briefly in the following paragraph.
On the positive side, Transporting foods over long distance gives an choice of food for many foodies
around the world. We can taste a varieties of foods like fruits, vegetables from all around the world.
For example, ten years ago, we hardly saw Kiwi fruit in supermarket since it requires a proper
tropical conditions to harvest. So, only few countries have harvested. But, now Kiwi fruit is easily
available and can be seen in every supermarket in all corners of the world.
On the negative side, Importing foods may affect the economy and environment in many possible
ways. For example, Over packaging will be done and excess preservative can be added to prevent
the food from rot since imported foods are travelled over long distance and this cause an
detrimental effect on environment, economy and health of citizens as well.
To conclude this, Traditional foods are to be preferred rather than imported foods. Every citizen
must support local food products to keep their health, economy and environment to lead a
prosperous life. Albeit, Imported foods has both advantages and dis advantages but the
disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Food
...e of imported foods rather than local food products. As per the survey, many peopl...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Foods
... world are likely to consume imported foods rather than local ones. This cause a de...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Environment
...on social economy and great impact on environment. We will discuss about this briefly in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...sporting foods over long distance gives an choice of food for many foodies aroun...
^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Around
...es an choice of food for many foodies around the world. We can taste a varieties of ...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 32, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a variety' or simply 'varieties'?
Suggestion: a variety; varieties
...oodies around the world. We can taste a varieties of foods like fruits, vegetables from a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tropical
...upermarket since it requires a proper tropical conditions to harvest. So, only few cou...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Available
...vested. But, now Kiwi fruit is easily available and can be seen in every supermarket in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ways
...nomy and environment in many possible ways. For example, Over packaging will be do...
^^^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Detrimental
... over long distance and this cause an detrimental effect on environment, economy and heal...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Prosperous
...th, economy and environment to lead a prosperous life. Albeit, Imported foods has both a...
^^^^^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Disadvantages
...advantages and dis advantages but the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, if, may, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37295081967 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71563636471 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577868852459 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6768993821 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6428571429 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.12807881773 412% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218070098453 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807031991634 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543907613636 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739487196993 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665254064515 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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