Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that professional athletes are born with talent.You cannot train someone to be a professional athlete.Give reasons and examples.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: People
...at is what makes each one of us special.People realize their talent at different stage...
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Suggestion: Parents
...lent at different stages in their lives.Parents and teachers play a key role in helping...
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Suggestion: In
...the role of talent in achieving success.In my opinion,besides talent Passion and D...
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Suggestion: , besides
...alent in achieving success.In my opinion,besides talent Passion and Dedication play a vi...
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Suggestion: Many
... role to achieve professional standards.Many sports persons have failed in their ini...
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Suggestion: Forinstance
...tion they were able to win many laurels.Forinstance,MICHAEL JORDAN was dropped from the hig...
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Suggestion: , MICHAEL
...ere able to win many laurels.Forinstance,MICHAEL JORDAN was dropped from the high school...
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Suggestion: .
... basket ball team, due to lack of talent .But now everyone knows him .If Talent al...
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Suggestion: But
...asket ball team, due to lack of talent .But now everyone knows him .If Talent alone...
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Line 2, column 442, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ck of talent .But now everyone knows him .If Talent alone played an important role...
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Suggestion: If
... of talent .But now everyone knows him .If Talent alone played an important role t...
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Suggestion: ,
... important role to become a professional , we wouldn't have had well known sp...
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Suggestion: , For
...well known sports persons. In addition,For a talent to develop into skill ,require...
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Suggestion: ,
...ition,For a talent to develop into skill ,requires passion and continuous practice...
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Suggestion: Tocite
...equires passion and continuous practice.Tocite,a person might be good at running but t...
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...s passion and continuous practice.Tocite,a person might be good at running but to ...
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Suggestion: One
...es Hard work and never give-up attitude.One must put in hardwork to harvest and cul...
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Suggestion: ,
...cultivate their talent.without hard work ,talent is meaningless. To conclude , be...
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...ork ,talent is meaningless. To conclude , becoming a professional in any field re...
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Suggestion: Ibelieve
... desire to learn and passion towards it.Ibelieve in the saying'HARDWOK BEATS TALENT...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, regarding, so, well, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66831683168 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67050169058 2.67179642975 137% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678217821782 0.524837075471 129% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.136158313 48.9658058833 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.25 100.406767564 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.5 20.6045352989 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 5.45110844103 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152009216509 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915593744652 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404131192257 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915593744652 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404131192257 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.5 11.7677419355 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 58.1214874552 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.1575268817 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 10.9000537634 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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