Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. how far do you agree with the above statement.
In historical period only mother language is very preferred by people. And they always do conversation in single language. Moreover in school teachers only teach single language. But know day’s student speak many languages like they speak mother language and foreign language. However they tell that foreign language should be made compulsory in the primary school. I will discuss advantages and disadvantages of this statement.
Firstly, foreign languages is very good thing we should learn about these languages. Now day’s foreign language is becoming a part of human life. Moreover in our society a person who can speak foreign language that person can survive in our society. Moreover the school which teaches about English or other international languages it was booming day by day. And more students are studied in these schools. On the next step in offices international languages are speak much. Because foreign language is shown as a state as symbol. The person who cannot speak in English that person shown as an uneducated. For example in India 60% people speaking English and they earning handsome money and other getting less.
On the other hand, learning foreign language is a part of life but people are forgetting their mother language. Moreover they feel shame when they use mother language in front of people. Now days people are failed to know about their tradition, culture and customs. After that they are forgetting their history of nation and that horrible things that happened with their alders. For example in Punjab the historical language is udhdu which is very popular in earlier days but know only 5 to 10% people know about this language.
To end, I think that people should learn foreign languages but they should also remember about their mother language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17465753425 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49703098234 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493150684932 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6551724138 166% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8468364973 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.9523809524 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 2.91625615764 411% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217256330421 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751498487746 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907749044014 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150875037038 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735042233584 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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