Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement.

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Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement.

The importance of foreign languages which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while reject this notion. The substantial influence of foreign languages has sparked over the potential impact in recent year. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will explain this arguments but the most preponderant one steams from the fact that foreign languages are the compulsory in the primary school and new experience to the children. Another pivotal aspect of this need to say, all these merits stand foreign languages.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of foreign languages but the most alarming one is that children are the major problem to the foreign languages. Hence, it is apartment why many are against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one reach a conclusion that the benefits of foreign languages compulsory in the primary school are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...re myriad of reasons which will explain this arguments but the most preponderant one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.485 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80481282798 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.112311551 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.7 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206425998761 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801877694684 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597527391985 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136370379282 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576301117343 0.0609392437508 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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