Foreign languages should be compulsory in the primary schools. How far do you agree with the above statement.

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Foreign languages should be compulsory in the primary schools. How far do you agree with the above statement.

Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have change more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary schools has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain. Regarding this, I will elaborate my viewpoints in given paragraph.
To begin with, the foreign languages should be made in the primary schools because they don’t know about very well with foreign languages. They just talk with their own languages to their teachers and in their schools. They well know about their languages but don’t know about foreign language. If the foreign language is compulsory in primary schools that students talk better in foreign languages. They talk with their friends and teachers with foreign languages this is best way to improve in their language. They communicate it one to another person easily. They also talk with foreigners easily if they go outside.
On the other hand, I will discuss that foreign languages are compulsory in the primary schools is very good way to teach students to know about foreign language. If the schools spend the child’s time in foreign languages they don’t know about their own language. Furthermore, they know about their own language which is talk to recent times. Moreover, they know about foreign languages but also their own language.
In a nutshell, I will elaborate with both sides of the views.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...don't know about foreign language. If the foreign language is compulsory in p...
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...nd teachers with foreign languages this is best way to improve in their language. They ...
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...nicate it one to another person easily. They also talk with foreigners easily if the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elaborate with both sides of the views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.152 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63848441345 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 139.433497537 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44 0.580463131201 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4510646797 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237440237408 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967201157043 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855772778646 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136177120777 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680197950421 0.0609392437508 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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