Global climate change is regarded as a severe problem. Who should take responsibilities governments, large companies or individuals? Please explain.
Climate change is one of the most catastrophe that the world is facing.Both should take an action about this problem . Not only the government ,big industry and each of every one of us.
To begin, with this is happening all around the word that every month or each year their is a disaster that we are facing off .The governments should take an action right away that can they can help our environment more livable due to climate change.Like for example they should execute a law that prohibit some companies of producing too much congestion of polluted air.Because in this case it causes some harmful effect in air pollution.
Second climate change can damage our environment as well as human being. All human kind must be cautious in every action they are being made.For instance we must plant more tree in our surroundings, or in the forest so that if their is typhoon it help to hold the water so that their is no more landslide and flash-flood in the city.Every individual must teach their siblings as well what is the important of global climate .
Therefore, I concluded that each government agencies, companies, or individuals has it's own rule towards better climate . We should have a helping hand so that in the future generations will be more efficient to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79545454545 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65443581195 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.674841058 50.4703680194 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.714285714 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4285714286 20.9669160288 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151218302886 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749199744558 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563215978472 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956030115542 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285998213726 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.