The government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
I do not agree when they say that the government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. I feel that each subject should be given equal importance as they all help in child's overall development.
It has been time and again proven that overdose of anything is bad. While science is important aspect of the present fast moving world, giving it importance on the cost of other subjects would kill the creativity, leadership skills and other important skills required for society to move forward. Moreover, science without mathematics or literature is itself incomplete. If more money is invested in science than mathematics and literature, it would hinder the student's vision to see the complete thing.
The countries of today's world need great leaders, which cannot be achieved just through science. The thorough knowledge of subjects like history, geography, polity etcetera is vital for a leader to lead the people. Science can progress the nation but if it comes at the cost of past culture or environment, the development would be limited and not holistic. The nations need to grow together with overall development of people of various class, creed and colour. Without touching every important subject with equal importance it would be difficult for different citizens to shine in their full potential.
Therefore, to conclude I would like to say that while science is crucial for the development of human civilization, ignoring other subjects for the sake of science is not suggestible. Growth of every subject is imperative for the holistic development of human civilization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.75862068966 365% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26996197719 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78278684332 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0351445756 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293144745037 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105539428751 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152367877836 0.071462118173 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19659044385 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135654609682 0.0609392437508 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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