You need to study climate change. Which aspect of climate change will you choose and why? Use examples.
According to me, global warming is the most impactful aspect of climate change in today's world, and if given an opportunity, I would like to study about it in detail.
The global warming has impacted almost all the nations in the world. The Paris Agreement of 2015, initiated by the United Nations, has been signed by more than 150 countries of the world. Its main agenda is the reduction of carbon emission, which is the main reason for the spread of global warming. Experts feel that if the situation is not controlled now, it would lead to disastrous effects in future. Due to global warming, the ice of Antarctica in South is decreasing rapidly and is becoming a part of the ocean. This will in turn impact the world cities of sea-shore like Sydney, Chennai, New York etcetera. The increase in ocean water will lead to decrease in land mass available on the planet Earth, thereby threatening the cities on the sea shores.
The global warming is also the most debatable topic on climate change. One can read about numerous debates on global warming in newspapers, magazines, websites etcetera. Many countries have reduced the usage of petrol run engines and are now developing various other means of alternative source of energy like solar energy. The tropical countries, especially, are increasing their focus on using solar energy as their primary source of energy. These countries have promised to reduce their carbon emission by over fifty per cent by the year 2030.
Most of the countries are now focusing on the ways to reduce global warming, and therefore, it is the most burning topic in today's world environment change. Therefore, it is imperative that the citizens are aware of the phenomena of global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
According to me, global warming is the most impactful a...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ow, it would lead to disastrous effects in future. Due to global warming, the ice of Anta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93493150685 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53449415673 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6646510919 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0666666667 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53333333333 7.25397266985 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0909834461086 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298988310866 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485234731129 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659844282063 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529676604669 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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