government should reduce their investment.
The importance of reduce their investment in arts, music and painting which was always debatable has now more become controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which I will further elaborate this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting which will helpful for people. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that government should invest money in other subjects which will helpful for students for their further study and they should open the free hospitals for poor people. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that government should invest money to build more schools for the poor people with the help of this they can also successful in their life. Besides, government should invest the money in medical treatment for patient. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of government should increase their investment to build more schools are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15057915058 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57083137986 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517374517375 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8177614975 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.272727273 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239248403441 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927729215661 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886235926763 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164387954855 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666321056513 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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