‘Schools should provide physical exercise lessons for children every day.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and use examples from your own experience.
Over the last few decades, the question of implementing physical exercise lessons in dayly basis has become the subject of considerable controversy. Some people tend to consider compulsory activities for children as an outdated approach, while others believe that it is sufficiently effective method. This essay will prove that providing phisical lessons for children every day is more advantageous nowadays.
To begin with, in today's rapidly changing world there is a wide range of learning approaches, which schools can impose in their study process. Generally, regular exercising might essentially improve child's mental health, let alone physical. For instance, the last research conducted by Australian Department of Health has revealed that school students who attended sport lessons dayly showed 35% better mental and physical health condition.
Moreover, another contributing factor is the constant development of technologies and its impact on children i definitely detrimental. These days, teachers should getting used thinking out of the box to attract young generation to healthy lifestyle. For example, Sydney's middle and primary schools annually provide sport competitions with high prizes rewarding, and number of participants has been increased twice for the past 3 years.
In conclusion, despite widely supported opinion about allowing children to decide by themself how much time they would like to spend on sport, I firmly believe that providing physical exercise lessons for them dayly is more beneficial.
- In some countries there have been schemes to encourage older professional people to retrain as school teachers Do you feel that this is likely to have beneficial effects on education Support your point of view with reasons and or examples from your own ex 88
- In many towns and cities large shopping malls are replacing small local shops What is your opinion on this Do you think this is a positive development Use your own experiences 84
- These days more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time either to find a job or to study There are clearly many benefits to doing this but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties Discuss the advantages a 80
- Some people point out that experiential learning can work well in formal education However other think a traditional form of teaching is the best Do you think experiential learning is beneficial in high school or college 56
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary Choose which position you most agree with and discus 55
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7610619469 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85029946918 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.738938053097 0.580463131201 127% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3710043388 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271119633418 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916548478142 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635469193778 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150242578543 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383078140048 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7610619469 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85029946918 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.738938053097 0.580463131201 127% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3710043388 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271119633418 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916548478142 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635469193778 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150242578543 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383078140048 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.