In this day and age, think of recent inventions that are beneficial or detrimental to the society has become a controversial debate among public around the world. these inventions generated to benefit people besides many damages that can bring to us. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze some disadvantages of some recent inventions.
To begin with, there are various reasons to accept the negative effects of humans inventions. At first, Although the computer brought many advantages to people's life, it is harmful to human's health. After the advent of the computer, the people activities declined. For example, the people activities have become lower with the jobs influenced by computer systems and it is very bad for human's body.
In addition, some of these inventions such as Television are a sign of luxury-oriented and wasting time. Many people addicted to watching TV too much every day. They lost the best times of their lives. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by THR University researchers in 2014 has shown that a significant number of people in around the world, they waste their living time in front of the TV instead of doing works such as reading book, learning, and even earning money.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the recent inventions, I profoundly believe that despite all benefits, the recent man-made could be damaging to people living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15517241379 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76533396503 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0378095162 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0907263264209 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326720331702 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046741027209 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575620356022 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461790292888 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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