Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statement? Use your own examples to support.
There is an intense competition among countries to host events such as FIFA worldcup and Olympics. While some people believe that hosting such events has many advantages, others maintain that it has worse consequences. This essay will discuss how these events are beneficial for the host country.
These sporting country brings huge investment in a country and create more job opportunities. When any event is planned in any country, organisers start convincing investors to invest in that country which may include improvement of infrastructure and other facilities to make that mega event successful. For instance in 2010 when it was announced that Qatar will host the FIFA world cup of 2022, construction for infrastructure started rapidly and creating many job opportunities in construction industry for local people as well. Therefore, infrastructure of a country is developed and employment opportunities.
Also these events bring people from all over the world creating awareness among people. During the event, people from different parts of the world come and have a chance to interact with local people which leads to awareness about different countries. For example, during Olympics 2000 which was held in Australia more people got to know about Australia and since then it has one of the highest immigration rate in the world. Clearly, an awareness was created about Australia as a future destination and now its economy is flourishing.
In conclusion, hosting sporting events help in creating employment opportunities for local people and also create awareness among them about future prospects. In my opinion, these events bring far too many advantages than disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...eloped and employment opportunities. Also these events bring people from all over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47328244275 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99498444439 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549618320611 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7170693248 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218821171871 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886225726339 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489467848586 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147483604829 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613977095521 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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