. How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that excessive work load would greatly affect personal life and experiences. Critics, however, claim that in todays world wealth is a neccesity to make your life comfortable and smooth. I, personally believe that former argument is more realistic and worth to believe.In this essay, I shall highlight some of the main features of this statement before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that too much involvement in professional life would lead to disturbance in personal life. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that in this contemporary world, people can go for excessive work load for wealth in order to live luxurious life. However, this act can sometimes ruin their personal life. As a prime example, according to recent research from the department of medical science, stress due to work load is the main reason to develop serious psychological issues.
Another, pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that parents are the best guardians of their children and professional work load can sometimes lead to negligence and ignorance. Therefore, this behavior in children would have vulnerable effects on society, which includes, poverty, revenge, emergence of criminal activities and other social issues.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds that spending too much time on professional life can lead to disturbance in personal life. Therefore, maintanance between these two is important to live healthy and wealthy life. Thus, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45801526718 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8691020201 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9081624602 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167760923194 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656360517416 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626556103926 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104583051717 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597992359853 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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