In the recent years, there has been an increasing interest in the way people use their time. There is a notorious change since the last few decades that can be observed evidently in the patterns of behavior. Questions have been raised whether the rhythm is appropriate or can carry out some issued. In this essay, I will explore the negative implications of this issue and I will provide a possible alternative solution to this matter.
One criticism of the time consumed working are the negative consequences that have on the overall well-being of the humans. The most evident impact is related to the mental-health issues triggered by conditions such as stress, pressure, depression, and low self-esteem. Alternatively, according to a recent study performed by the University of Harvard demonstrated that exists a direct correlation between leisure time and happiness. Therefore, it is clear that the prioritization of time is necessary to have a balanced, well-organized life.
In order to identify the triggers of this lack of quality time, it is necessary to understand the way the society is shaped. During the last decade, the pressure to be competitive in the workplace has been raising in a way that cannot be predicted. This desperate competition leads the workers to try to accomplish and unendurable task in order to succeed. Therefore, the employee sacrificed personal time to remain competitive in a world where everything is measured in a quantitative way. This is exemplified by the numbers provided by a research company that showed that in Japan the average employee works up to 80 hours per week.
In summary, it was argued the main reason behind the workaholic society and its possible root causes, reaching the conclusion that the pressure that the work environment put on the worker is unacceptable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a quantitative way" with adverb for "quantitative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17171717172 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08378542817 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579124579125 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5793738953 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129001946293 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442726057052 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436064737348 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697446717681 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031403867477 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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