Human values are losing because of wealth-producing careers such as medicine? Do you agree or disagree?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend by the prodigies discussing the diminishing of human values due to wealth-producing careers. Some people believe that wealth producing careers like medicine have jeopradize the human values, while others think that human values are still being maintained. This essay will discuss that how highly paid professions have resulted in decline of human values.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with the diminishing of human values due to high paid professions. The most conspicuous is that people for the lust of money and in pursuit of their wealthy careers cross all boundaries of humanity. This directly leads to loss of human values in a society and other minor professions also start follow the same foot steps. For instance, in under developed countries like Pakistan, medicine has become a business and to earn more, doctors are not only charging high fees to fill in their pockets but also prescribing expensive or sub-standard medicines for the companies they need to promote. As a matter of fact, it is evident professions with high income have surpassed all human values to achieve their personal goals.
On the other hand, proponents of the view that wealth-producing careers do not disrupt human values with in the society are not cognizant with the evil acts performed by these professionals. Despite the medical condition of the patient, doctors try to preform unnecessary operations to allow influx of more money. As an example, for a minor arm injury a doctor would go for an operation instead of POP. As a result, such actions have eclipsed the human values within the society.
To recapitulate, foregoing discsussion propounds the view that for the lust of money and personal gains medical professionals have crossed all the limits of humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, while, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16333333333 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83955199909 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9051083736 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247209098349 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091544313415 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842495416962 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141685828337 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938318548939 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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