If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose?
Nowadays, the climate change of north pole has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether studying about the changes in north pole’s weather is a reasonable decision or not?”. It is a widely held view that surveying the ecosystem of both pole is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that more stydies must be carried out to protect this area.
To begin with, it is a common belief that north pole as a significant habtat for widelife plays a vital role in the developing world. Therefor, I express several reasons why I have chosen this region. First and foremost is that both poles are the only habitat for some unique animals, such as white bear and penguins that their lives are impossible without ice. Secondly, it can be argued that recently global warming are threating this area that leads to melting ice caps, subsequently increasing the sea level, and destruction of the ozone layer. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that constructing an extensive range of industrial factories have made the greenhouse gases increase widespreadly and endanger the aquatic ecosystem.
However, there is no doubt that various imformed decision must be make to address this crisis. It should be taken into accout that the government must encourage the factories to relocate to the less beautiful areas by offering loans. Moreover, it is quite clear that tougher laws should be obtained in order to reduce over-fishing and poaching.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that by making suitable decision we will be able to overcome the problems of the north pole. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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- The government should reduce their investment in arts, music, and painting. Agree or disagree? 85
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples. 77
- The government should reduce their investment in arts, music, and painting. Agree or disagree? 11
- Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree? 11
- Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...climate change of north pole has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15719063545 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82541204266 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632107023411 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1858013613 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0725041591494 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232013325334 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284545417625 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0426042089879 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252550188429 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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