Impact of television shows on society?

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Impact of television shows on society?

The importance of television shows on society which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This will further elaborate my reason for the positive effects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant stems from fact that television shows are good for our society because television shows teach us everything as well as there are so many television shows are broadcast on television moreover so many varieties of shows run on television some shows are good for watching like man versus wild which teach us how to survive in arduous situation. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that some shows are absurd of watching therefore that types of shows effecting on human nature. Needless to say all these merits stand television shows on society in a good stead.

Elaborating my view point this trend has some merits but the crucial effect is that television shows are good for students because students can learn so many thing from shows furthermore, comedy television shows are decrease stress of people after watching beside, television shows can developed our society hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of television shows on society.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of television shows on society are indeed to great.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
... students because students can learn so many thing from shows furthermore, comedy televisi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13414634146 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64514228572 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.012754467 50.4703680194 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.428571429 104.977214359 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1428571429 20.9669160288 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45267907508 0.242375264174 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244214783747 0.0925447433944 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130251331556 0.071462118173 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306446779215 0.151781067708 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114980403223 0.0609392437508 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 12.6369458128 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.9458128079 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.5123152709 200% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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