The importance of travel seems to be over rated. Brilliant scholars locked themselves at home. Travel is important for education. To what extent to you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, traveling for education has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “ whether traveling to abroad to continue study is a reasonable decision or not?”. It is a widely held view that move to overseas in order to study is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that living and studying in the developed countries play a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that students will be able to get familiar with other culture, language and lifestyle as well expand their horizon. Secondly, it can be argued that they are provided with modern facilities, such as technological labs and subsequently well-educated students will find a rewarding job opportunity to increase their earning capacity. In addition to this information, a group of socialists, working at a prestigious university conducted that those who have immigrated to foreign countries to continue their studies are more prosperous in terms of job position, education and, living standard.
However, there is no doubt that traveling abroad in order to continue education provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that culture shock and isolated lifestyle causes they are not able to enjoy education. Moreover, the expenditure of studying overseas is excessively high, so they will not afford to cover their costs.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that the importance of traveling abroad in order to have sound education must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ays, traveling for education has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27540983607 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00487823393 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7830991469 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.083333333 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117381436496 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410298745764 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056721424352 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761046972153 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331277102734 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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