The importance of travel seems to be over rated. Brilliant scholars locked themselves at home. Travel is important for education. To what extent to you agree or disagree.
As we're living in 21st century and in todays modernized world it is easy to identifyin our society where number of people travelling across the globe for higher studies, business and leisure.Majority of them considered as student who move to different countries mainly for education purpose. this article will discuss the benefits and related concerns which are tied up with travelling.
To begin with it is extremely important to highlight that our generation is more demanding compare to the earlier ones, due to meet their high standard and stand along with in social circle they must aware about tourism which required travelling hence its increasing time to time now a days, however it known that the famous scholars are now restricted themselves till their homeland. study play the vital role in our life and vast range of society teenagers are flaying around the world to complete their high school or bachelor studies,where on other side we have majority of people they go abroad for business and to enjoy their free slot.
To end this article providing my views, i believe that travel is necessary for higher education if the homeland country doesn't offers such courses which are essential in future as the world is transforming towards digitalization where travelling abroad and to see different culture closely plays quite important role in our lives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13452914798 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68347341711 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654708520179 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.5024630542 215% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4735497481 50.4703680194 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 229.0 104.977214359 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6 20.9669160288 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12843536235 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624309959081 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477344513832 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901275729039 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278138835999 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 12.6369458128 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.9458128079 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.3980295567 188% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.5123152709 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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