Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some bad and good effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the information revolution has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question " is it advantageous or not?". Whereas it is a widely held view that mass communications are highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the social point of view, mass communications are bound up inextricably with individual lives, which indicates they lead to both societies and good effects. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationships between effective communication and mass media as well as an exponential increase in people lifestyles. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of changing ways is correlated positively with not only information technology but also whole societies.
Within the realm of general science, without the slightest doubt, whole societies attribute to individual lives, it would come down to information changes and bad effects. A salient example of such attribution is social networks, which is cause for concern since it was mistaken to take mass media for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint the network problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of the information revolution.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes, "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above. I firmly believe that the advantages of the information revolution are of more significance.
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- Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some bad and good effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion? 85
- Do you think consumer should avoid over packaged products or it is the manufacturer that should avoid extra packaging of products? Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience. 85
- Internet or media is bad for young people because they make the young generation poor in communication and forming relationships. Do you agree with this opinion? Please use examples or your personal experience to support your idea. 88
- "In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed". Does a common man suffer from a group's ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples. 77
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67901234568 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29169235056 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674897119342 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0144098846 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250245271679 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772008332401 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299291189974 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129458488167 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378319701847 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.94827586207 176% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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