The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Recently, a mass media has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question " is it advantageous or not?". Whereas it is a widely held view that shaping societies are highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the social point of view, society shapes are bound up inextricably with mass media influences, which indicates they lead to both watching television and influencing people. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 to demonstrates the relationship between newspapers and positive impacts as well as an exponential increase in societies. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of great effects of news is correlated positively with not only mass media characters but also societies.
Within the realm of general science, without the slightest doubt, societies attribute to mass media characters, it would come down to popular forms and negative impacts, such A salient example of such attribution is reading newspapers, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take shaping opinions for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint social networking problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of mass media.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that end's well," after analyzing what elaborated above. I firmly believe that the advantages of mass media are of more significance.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...ying goes 'alls well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66532258065 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62510315975 2.71678728327 133% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689516129032 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3762033645 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1904711038 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065694960114 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449507982555 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991280608631 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032411886195 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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