The invention of internet has had mostly negative effect on civilization. How far do you agree with this statement?
Use specific reason and examples to support to your opinion.
Today the evolution of internet made a huge impact on society. This technology development started in 90s centuries the development increasing day by day. So, the invention of new technology which had some positive or negative aspect. I disagree with this statement the internet leads to a negative effect on civilization.
Firstly, the internet plays a negative role today. The google network announced the usage of the internet is increased over the past decade, these augments done most of teenagers and children. Whereas the children involving prohibited site such as dark web and sexual site, it may lead them to do crime in our society. For example, India today magazine released a statistics report, most of children enforce into cybercrime activity.
On the other side, this revolution of the internet made people gain knowledge around the world and transparency work held in all working sectors. The internet is used to transfer news instantly via web or communication networks like Facebook, Instagram, Whatsapp, Twitter, etc. For instance, if anyone needs to purchases a land they want to transfer an amount through the online, so it reduces corruption.
In conclusion, the internet in a boon for today society, the government need to block the server of unauthorized site, whereas parents need to focus the children activity as much as closer and give a right direction to them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the teenagers') or simply say ''most teenagers''.
Suggestion: most of the teenagers; most teenagers
...er the past decade, these augments done most of teenagers and children. Whereas the children invo...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
... magazine released a statistics report, most of children enforce into cybercrime activity. On ...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...book, Instagram, Whatsapp, Twitter, etc. For instance, if anyone needs to purchas...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'purchase'.
Suggestion: purchase
... etc. For instance, if anyone needs to purchases a land they want to transfer an amount ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85157439728 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657777777778 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3909400166 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183308306212 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735240547668 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887861420556 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100720747683 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792059977179 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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