It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The impact of getting married prior to finishing studies and settling down, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of married early has sparked a controversy impact of the trend on young people or teenagers over the years. It can be agreed that it is not a good decision to settling down before finishing studies, while some people claim the opposite. This essay will elaborate on how getting married early effect young adults and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why it is a foolish idea to get married early, but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that both young husband and wife are not in the stage of having a financial stability and maturity. For example, both young married couple will not able to get a high paid jobs as most employers nowadays would like to employ people with good qualification. Thus, married before graduate will not only be bad for both young married couple but also for their future as well.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that true love is also significant for married early as there are many reasons why, but the most predominant one lies the fact that early marriage actually allow the couple to focus on their studies in other field. As an illustration, couple can continue their studies after getting married and working hard together. Hence, there is indifferent for couples who are compatible and have similar goals in life to get married early.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of married early is prominent, but no definite as it is depend on individual’s preference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... is prominent, but no definite as it is depend on individual's preference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93079584775 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64901888216 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4482467142 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.545454545 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218818917556 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918581851302 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039679069048 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126692156737 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05014126804 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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