It is argued that getting married before Finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject notion. The substantial influence of this trend has speaker the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that, the first fact of not go to job after finish school they are not mature, and not get job , Which plays crucial role their personal life. Needless to say all these merits stand in a bad stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that not good thinking before married finishing school. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
To conclusion according to the arguments above one can reach to a conclusion that the drawbacks of getting married before finishing school are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98086124402 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55746207106 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598086124402 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4169241722 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243113922704 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882355900697 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105247105165 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154275437712 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262650399575 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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