It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The idea of early marriage before completing school or joining a work is widely debatable, with many people claiming the benefits it offers is no match for its drawbacks. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
At the outset, there are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that thanks to their tender age, younger individuals are feeble and immature to make any serious decision, thus they are likely to suffer from a range of obstacles, be it health or social. Not only do these teenagers fail to earn enough money and make a living, but their health is significantly affected and sometimes they are also a victim of a wide range of serious psychological diseases, such as depression, loneliness, and frustration. Although working in an adolescent period can be beneficial, it dramatically augments health issues in the young generation. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on young people.
Moreover, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that by getting married at an early age, they gradually receive a number of difficulties, from financial hardship and unemployment to arduous responsibilities including children responsibilities and family care. In another word, for example, a recent research invariably reveals, there is a negative correlation between early marriage and a successful couple and it has been held responsible for sky-rocketing divorces. Hence, it is apparent why many people are against early marriage.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that drawbacks of getting married or being employed before finishing school are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10833333333 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94274059717 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0328277786 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135733239701 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453033479739 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610072172068 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092462811448 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620311829667 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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