Whether to get married before or after getting a university degree and a good job has sparked an ongoing controversy recently. While some believe it is better to first complete the studies and take a worthwhile job and then marry, others maintain that marriage should be prioritized to studying and working. This essay will discuss why it is more likely to have a successful marriage after finishing college and securing a good job.
On the one hand, those who get married before having a tertiary education, which plays an important role in finding a well-paid job, and securing a good job pose a real risk to their marriages. This is because they find it difficult to financially support their family which, in turn, results in couples quarrelling with each other over household expenditures. Continuous unpleasant discussions negatively affect relationships, children's bringing up and education. Numerous studies have suggested that such discussions could eventually contribute to divorcing.
In addition, people tend to behave more maturely and gain practical wisdom by continuing their studies at higher levels and working. Therefore, they make more rational decisions when it comes to selecting their life partners and manage family problems smoothly and effectively. Statistics have indicated that the individuals who get married after completing college and finding a good job, experience a happier marriage than others which endures for years to come.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people can experience a tough financial position and make wrong decisions if they get married before landing a good job and completing their studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46692607004 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8844681048 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.81182736 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.727272727 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122648137183 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049509017409 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428002598971 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083745464493 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289036451111 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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