Whether to get married before or after getting a university degree and a good job has sparked an ongoing controversy recently. While some people believe that it is better to marry before, others maintain that finishing studies and building a career should be prioritized to marriage. This essay will discuss why it is more sensible to marry after finishing education and securing a good job.
Many people give first priority to completing studies and landing a good job than to marriage. They think that they will enjoy better job opportunities after finishing their studies and they can also spend quality time with their spouses when not struggling with loads of homework. The average marriage age has increased nowadays compared to a few past decades, for instance, because fewer people opt to marry before finishing college and getting a decent job.
However, some people think it is pointless to finish education and secure a good job prior to getting married. They neglect how the hardship of finding a job in the current terrible job market as well as limited free time for young couples negatively affects the newly-wed spouses. The drastically high rate of early breakups can be attributed to overlooking the importance of the above-said points.
In my opinion, completing studies which assist people to make a good career and as a result, putting them in a stable financial state is a marriage prerequisite.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, so, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10683760684 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68462137105 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5982594457 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147798757798 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646919836825 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477700051316 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901881293229 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060050486201 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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