Whether to get married before or after getting a university degree and a good job has sparked an ongoing controversy recently. While some people believe that it is better to marry before, others maintain that finishing studies and building a career should be prioritized to marriage. This essay will discuss why it is more sensible to marry after finishing education and securing a good job.
Many people give first priority to completing studies and landing a good job than to marriage. They think higher education brings about better job opportunities and getting a good job is mandatory to establish their own family. An increasing number of people prefer to get married in older ages than their twenties, for example, because they are in a far better economic state. Considering the high importance of the financial status in marriage, there is no reason for many people to opt for marring before finishing college and getting a decent job.
Despite the undeniable significance of having a well-paid job as an essential element in marriage, some people do not think it is necessary to secure it before getting married because they are neglecting the hardship of finding a job in the current terrible job market with the high unemployment rate. They also overlook the fact that in recent years, for instance, the majority of the youth who have got married while studying, without having proper employment, have experienced early breakups.
In my opinion, completing studies which assist people to make a good career and as a result, putting them in a stable financial state is a marriage prerequisite.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09811320755 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74546391157 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558490566038 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.114063541 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.1 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154511943201 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697361460952 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375949092644 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965832511796 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524583902204 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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