It is said that for some developed countries, tourism may cause some disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
In these days, people often take a variety of viewpoints when it comes to most daily life issue. To give an illustration, while many people believe that tourism may bring about some disadvantages to some developed countries, other hold the opinion that this is not the case. This essay offers some insights in favor of the former outlook.
There are a number of reliable grounds that support the belief that tourism may have some negative impact to some developed countries. First and foremost, serving an influx of tourist every year would make the infrastructure and facilities of the host country to degrade much faster. This is true especially when majority of visitors are coming from developing countries whose culture is different and hence, not considerate enough to keep the infrastructure such as ancient buildings at their best condition. Without foreign tourism, it can be argued that the facilities and infrastructure would last longer, leading to reduced maintenance cost.
In addition, ample evidence from a number of studies also suggests that many foreign tourists remain illegally in developed countries. There is no doubt that people from developing countries would try to stay in developed ones and eventually become offenders such as robbers. As such, these people become a burden of the society and impede its development. To give an illustration, it is reported that there is thousands of illegal residents in the United States, being homeless, unemployed and burdening its social welfare such as healthcare.
In conclusion, from the above analysis, it is obvious that for some developed countries, tourism may cause some disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are thousands'?
Suggestion: there are thousands
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, may, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3536121673 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8812161841 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2251052309 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286447534672 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111826620645 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140565182687 0.071462118173 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222808219633 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145311742049 0.0609392437508 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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