It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree”
There is an ongoing debate between different stratum of society that it is foolish to get married before completing your studies and get established is a good job while other's believe opposite is also correct. I believe that getting married before completing your studies and settled is a not a good option to choose. I shall discuss various drawback of getting married early
Firstly, there are several resones why I not in the favor of early marriage. Foremost, among is economic reason. for example children are depend on their parents for their study expenditure and getting married in early stage bring more problem to their economic status and create further issues in their completion of study. Hence it not a good idea to getting married early
Secondly, the resones why I not in the favor of early marriage is social pressure. In our society getting married before well established is cosidered as crime against socitey and its highly demotivated for coupls to cope with . for example some times such couples alianeted from socities whihc leads to stressfull life.
To recapitulate ,To meet the expinditure to live a we need suficient income in my opinian it's not a good idea to get married before completeing your studies and get established .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.004784689 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61415545911 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8023359904 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.222222222 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419189644881 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184105126902 0.0925447433944 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153449800843 0.071462118173 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272811108328 0.151781067708 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158152859845 0.0609392437508 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.