It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree”
Getting married before having a good and stable job or before completing studies is not a wise decision. It will definitely create a lot of problems and maybe not good for the couple too. This essay agrees that marrying before stable job or completing studies is not good. This essay will provide the and maybe not good for the couple too. This essay agrees that marrying before stable job or completing studies is not good. This essay will provide the in depth analysis to support the argument.
Firstly, getting married before a good job may create a hardship to a newly married couple and may not be a good choice. Generally, it requires lots of efforts to settle in the new job. In a new job you have to prove yourself by taking additional responsibilities. For example, new job may be too demanding and may requires lots of travelling out of town. This may not be a good situation for spouse. So getting married before having a good and well paid job is foolish.
Secondly, marriage is not a good option for students before completing the studies. This may create an extra burden on the student and he may lose is focused on studies. For instance; a married student has to spend time with spouse and studies which may be sometimes demanding. In the same time the students can focus more on studies before marriage because it gives them more time to study without diverting their attention.
In conclusion, it is not a good idea to get married before completing the studies or before settling down well in a job. If the person is paying attention to this, then it may make their material relation in jeopardy and may make the situation insidious. As per the old saying, "We should not play two different games to gather, you will lose in both of them"
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and maybe not good for the couple too. This essay agrees that marrying before stabl...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... job or completing studies is not good. This essay will provide the in depth analysi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies. For instance; a married student has to spend time with spouse and studies wh...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...tudy without diverting their attention. In conclusion, it is not a good idea to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 314.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65286624204 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52148261124 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436305732484 0.580463131201 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6417898174 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8947368421 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36230801356 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144503473998 0.0925447433944 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14496733417 0.071462118173 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229871786193 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075389421575 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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