It's difficult to maintenance the balance between work and other aspects of life such as family and leisure time, what is your opinion to keep it balanced.
Nowadays people are spending more time at work than with family or doing any other activities. This is because there has been an increasingly high demand of duties and there is no time left to accomplish such tasks. People even have to take some remaining works to their houses to finish due to the deadlines. Therefore, there is no time to be spent with family.
A good way to maintain the balance would be to schedule oneself. For example, the time supposed to spend working is the time to spend only for work nothing else. If one did not have time to finish the tasks at work, he/she should leave those taks for the following day. It does not matter about the week accomplishments. We all need time for family and relaxation. Thus, if we do not have time for those, we are probably not going to be able to work efficiently and to have a good life as well.
Moreover, another way to keep the balance would be not wanting to make much money. Doing it requires hard and many works. Because the more money one wants the more work he will have to do.
Finally, we have to tear apart work time and family and leisure time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
..., another way to keep the balance would be not wanting to make much money. Doing it requires h...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... Doing it requires hard and many works. Because the more money one wants the more work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 1207.87684729 76% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37320574163 5.00649968141 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28286332026 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6771658629 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.2857142857 104.977214359 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208137022261 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737252421087 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560609975715 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140908726277 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536659636104 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 12.6369458128 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.1260098522 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.9458128079 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 11.5310837438 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.32886699507 80% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 55.0591133005 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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