Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this?
Discuss with appropriate examples.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the mall culture, as shopping
malls have evolved into multi-storied structures housing a large number of stores that sell diverse products
and services. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of problems in consumers’ life.
In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that shopping
malls house a collection of retail stores and restaurants along with a plenty of parking space. Not only do
shopping malls eliminate parking problem by providing parking either free of charge or for a nominal fee,
but they also contribute a great deal to making shopping convenient with such stores as groceries, shoes,
food courts and the like under one roof. Needless to say, all these merits stand consumers in good stead, as
far as eliminating shopping hassle is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of shopping malls.
Primarily, they include excessive crowding, especially on weekends and holidays. Besides, crowded aisles
and stores make shopping very difficult and people often end up forgetting items they needed to buy. Last
but not least, the temptation to browse is always present, and browsing often leads to buying things that
are not needed, thus making it difficult to keep to a monthly budget.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of
big shopping complexes are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...d into multi-storied structures housing a large number of stores that sell diverse products and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22388059701 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78527218509 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.07673343 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.12807881773 412% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153029987412 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492947976424 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404649865743 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444567246064 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328511191599 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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