Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
A consumerism trend is growing drastically, and popularity of shopping malls is increasing because of ample of convenient and comfortable reasons. Some people believe that this boosting fever of shopping mall ruining the sales of small retailers in the open market while others argue that shopping malls are advance great development. This essay will give assertion on both sides of the contention before delivering plausible conclusion.
To begin, these giant malls offer various kinds of shops at one place. Due to which, people can easily purchase things under one roof. These shopping malls are monitored by security guards; hence visitors feel comfortable when they walk around the malls. For example, security cameras are placed at different angles and at different locations for tight surveillance.
On the other hand, these shopping malls have some drawbacks also. These days more and more people choose to go to large shopping malls, due to which the sales of small shops are going down. As a consequence, many of these shops owners have to close their business or have to reduce the number of employees. In addition, heavy discounts are offered by malls in festival seasons which also gravitate more buyers and divert their attention from traditional and small shops. For instance, around 50% discounts are given to customers during Christmas time. Thus, people mostly prefer to buy things from malls not from local shops.
To recapitulate, I personally believe that, the existence of shopping malls will boost the economic growth of the city. But, many people still depend on small shops for their livelihood. So, it is the government task to make some strict regulations about this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...hese shopping malls have some drawbacks also. These days more and more people choose...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24087591241 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57398386459 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.302332914 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223541376904 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718913413143 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469600495384 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139450434425 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436422291317 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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