Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples
The importance of huge commercial stores instead small ones, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. This essay will elaborate both the advantages and the disadvantages of big stores which are replacing small commercial centers, and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why large malls instead small markets has proved to be beneficial for society, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that brands can be the primary source for buyers. For instance, cinemas can be a major aspect that relates to modern society these days, so people must pay close attention to it. Therefore, the importance of restaurants must not be overlooked because infrastructure may affect sales.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of enormous stores rather than little shopping centers, but the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that parents feel just as a convinced that games has profound impacts on children. For example, movies are undoubtedly the most accepted activities in Australia. thus, modern commercial markets will continue to influence the future of cities.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of shopping malls, is prominent, although it has a number of drawbacks that should be well handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
... most accepted activities in Australia. thus, modern commercial markets will continu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35023041475 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82118746771 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0430025283 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102982195085 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357754882571 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387880429628 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612257414219 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303407921791 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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