Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The importance of relationship with their pets,and treat their birds cats and other animals as member of their family which was always debatable has now trend more become with many peoples claiming that it is beneficial while others people reject this notion. This substantial influlence trend has sparked the controversy potential impact over recent years. In my opinion former proposition is more rational. I will below paragraphs discuss negtive and postive effects of this trend and lead to logiocal conclusion.
These are myriad reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most prerpoderant one stems from the fact that some people very close to their animals like, dogs,cats,and birds. because pets animals are loyal and faithfully. some people nurture their specific reasons. For instance, dogs nurture for security purpose all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certinly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that some pet animal species are very dangerous like dogs pitbull, american bully. for instance, some dangerous animals bite and attack their children so it is very dangerous.
According to aaforementioned above, viewpointscan reach to a conclusion that the benefit of their security purpose because these are faithful and loyal are instrumental indeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52511415525 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65452763438 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3091699223 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285060652001 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986465028437 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108579936298 0.071462118173 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15583452484 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08332039247 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.