Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Nowadays, replacing shopping malls instead of small shops has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether reaplacing malls with local shops are a reasonable decision or not?. It is a widely held view that complex buildings is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefullu the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that large malls for shopping plays a vital role in the world of cut-throal competition. Therefore, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that they are easy to access as well as convenient and all shops, cinemas and recreational centers are under one roof. Secondly, it can be argued that you can find a wide variety of commodities with reasonable price. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that large malls often have vast parking space that diminish the problem of traffic conjestion. A very tanjible example to illustrate would be the cosmopolitan cities that people can do shopping from large malls without wasting time.
However, there is no doubt that replacing large malls with small shops provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that the cost of building these centers are significantly high, also it takes plenty of time to construct. moreover, large malls are located far from central part of the city and costomers have to spend mush time to go commute.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that replacing large malls instead of small shops to make shopping so convenience must be taken into consideration. However, as every gardenmay have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09364548495 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78874018955 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1837959967 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294999500109 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100277505936 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877849867758 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180218533943 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178784399635 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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